Last Dance

I never did post this one on my other galleries because the perspective screwiness irks me too much, but it makes me smile anyway. When I went back to revise the final chapter of "Probability Experiment," it was because one specific choice didn't work as well on the page as it did in my head – but I was surprised to find a couple other things just jumping out at me as missed opportunities, and as a result the final product turned out much stronger than if I'd just written it that way to begin with. In particular, paying off the dance scene from earlier and tying it into the awkwardness between Stu/Sue and her mother was something I could believe I'd missed the first time, and naturally I had to get a doodle out of it ;)